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Tuesday, April 11, 2017

Can you help these innocent creatures?

WALT use language features of persuasive writing
To be successful I will:add emotive words and use rhetorical questions.
Use rhetorical questions to make my writing interesting
Use emotive language (words about feelings/emotions)

What I found easy was to add emotive words because I didn't want it to be simple
What I found hard was to think of rhetorical questions because i want the readers to be think about how they are suffering and how much they are in pain.


plastic bags are not cool!!
      
I strongly  believe that plastic bag are dreadful for the environment and bring tragic to the animals.


Firstly, I am heartbroken because all those innocent animals/sea creature have to suffer in pain because of those dirty plastic bags.Those poor animals can’t survive if the plastic bags and are outrageous suffering. We need to stop and start looking after our environment that includes our creatures. Creatures are suffocating because of these plastic bags because of us,we need to help them so they won’t be extinct.
Will you them to help keep them clean and safe for their sake?


Secondly,plastic bags are dreadfully disgusting for the environment.i bet that you wouldn’t care about the plastic bags polluting the environment,well i do so should you.I would make sure that the environment wasn’t polluted with those outrageous plastic bags and keep it clean.We need to STOP POLLUTING the ENVIRONMENT and clean it till the plastic bags are extinct but,still usable for the other stuff it good to use.
imagine if you were the environment and your were polluted,what would you do?
I would make sure that i’m clean.would you do it?


In summary,plastic bags are harmful to creatures,they also they pollute our environment which is very tragic to animals and sea creatures,mostly the sea creatures have been suffering like (suffocating,strangled,cuts and other amazingly horrible things)
Do you want to help for them to be safe and more happier than now?

Monday, April 10, 2017

Do you know how to do subtracting by going through a tidy number?



This is an Example of how to subtract by going back into a tidy number.
Do you know how to subtract by going back through a tidy number?
What I found easy was using the tidy number and subtracting it with another digit
What I found hard was doing the sums with the double digits sum.